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I'm just a stitch away,
From perfection.

I'm just a stitch away,
From realization.

I'm just a stitch away,
From completion.

Yet I'm out of thread,
Out of space,
Out of luck,
Out of time.

I gave up-
Set down my work.
I gave in-
Cut the ties.

I broke bonds-
Burned the holds.
I ran off-
Leaving ruined cloth.

But in truth,
There was more.


There was thread left to spare.

It was just a snag,
A knot in my perfection.

A meaningless reason
For me to give up.

So why did I insist on stopping?
Why did I insist on running?
I'M BACK!!!! =D!

Ok yeah, seriously though- sorry for those that missed me posting new pieces =D!
EDIT: Changed like two lines to help it flow a bit better. Hope y'all like the better flow :meow:
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Eredev Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
How did I miss this one :confused:
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Thisntme Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Any other one of my recent ones EXCEPT this one, I could pass off as missing it...

This one has been on my featured tile for since it was posted...
Blind fool :X!
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Eredev Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
And that's how I found it :D
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Thisntme Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconquadruplefacepalmplz:
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Eredev Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Can you kindly take those hands away? I can't see anything...
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Thisntme Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconextremefacepalmplz: [Never :XD:!]
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Eredev Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
But... but... how can I read anything you write now?!
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Thisntme Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The memories of reading them will be uploaded to your brain via visual processors, and integrated into your consciousness.

[Fine... *removes the hands*]
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Dauntless-Cookie Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist
wah another poem of yours to add to my favorites :meow: and i agree with wolfshadow i like the way you changed the font, amazing poem :D
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Thisntme Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a bunch :D!!! Glad you liked it!!!!
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